Do you know what your one defining moment was? Do you even have just one? How old were you when you figured out what you wanted to do with your life? Do you even know what you want to do with your life? Do you remember what you did in kindergarten? I know that I don’t. Probably picked my nose and knocked a ton of shit over.
My point is that all of our pasts have holes in them. Lots of blank stares, raised eyebrows, and shoulder shrugs. Probably a lot of made up stuff too.
So here is the fourth post of a five part series on simple (but maybe not so obvious) tips to make our stories better.
Today’s topic is Leaving Holes in a Backstory, alternately known as We Don’t Care About That.
First and foremost, avoid the info dump. It’s slightly useful, but unbelievably boring information. And no, we aren’t fooled because you put quotations around it. It’s been said a million…now a million and one times and it’s just as true as the first time it was said.
I don’t know about you all, but I love the mystery of an awesome character’s past. A huge driver for pushing through eight more chapters at four in the morning is to find out what Really (capital R) happened all those days or years ago (this is actually the premise of a ton of books, right?).
And just like you or me, a character doesn’t have ten pages of records describing all the important parts of their life. A reader can pick up a hint here, a line there, a thought back behind them, and piece it together themselves. It’s much more satisfying that way, and it’s much more interesting. Don’t relinquish your hold on a character’s backstory just to make the reader like them from the beginning.
As an extreme, boring, and one-dimensional example: What is more interesting? A detective whose wife was murdered three years ago goes on a rampage of revenge against a man who kills his friend’s wife? Or, a detective (whom we like and cheer for because of who he is) goes on a rampage of revenge against a man who kills his friend’s wife, and towards the end of the book we find out what we’ve slowly come to expect – that his own wife was murdered six years ago.
And don’t forget to leave holes. If I’ve met you the chances are that I don’t know the name of your childhood pet or the name of your high school, and I certainly don’t care to learn those things about your protagonist (unless, you know, it’s super relevant and you can disregard everything I just said).
So be mindful of how you reveal your character’s past. Depending on how you do it, it can be one of the biggest and most powerful drivers of your book.
Seriously, though, what did everyone do in kindergarten? I think I mostly napped and had snack time, something wasted on five and six years olds when there are poor high schoolers (read: working adults) out there falling asleep at their desks.
(Way to avoid info dump bro)